animallx96
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Join date : 2012-03-17
 |  Subject: A Short Poem  Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:44 am | |
| ~Poem I created for School, Hope You Like It  A LieI told a lie, A horrible lie, I fear. All I did was lie. The smallest decision, That can change, Life forever. I am now, Forever A liar. | |
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Alexy
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Join date : 2012-01-03
Location : Go Away.
| | Subject: Re: A Short Poem Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:23 am | |
| A very nice and short poem. If i had anything to say about it, it would be to change the lie in line 4 to some other word(s). I like it! | |
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Natalie
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Posts : 409
Join date : 2012-01-17
Location : Wizard101
| | Subject: Re: A Short Poem Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:46 am | |
| I like this poem! Simple but sounds nice  | |
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Autumn
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Join date : 2012-01-13
Location : classified
| | Subject: Re: A Short Poem Sun Apr 22, 2012 3:41 pm | |
| wow i love it. very simple but gets a point across. keep it up! | |
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