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|Subject: A Short Poem Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:44 am|| |
~Poem I created for School, Hope You Like It A Lie
I told a lie,
A horrible lie,
All I did was lie.
The smallest decision,
That can change,
I am now,
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|Subject: Re: A Short Poem Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:23 am|| |
A very nice and short poem. If i had anything to say about it, it would be to change the lie in line 4 to some other word(s). I like it!
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|Subject: Re: A Short Poem Sun Apr 22, 2012 3:41 pm|| |
wow i love it. very simple but gets a point across. keep it up!
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